Kate is headed to Pennsylvania to help her grandmother renovate her house that basically got preserved in the 50s. She arrives and they meet Matt, the man who is going to help out as well.
The writing itself was what stopped me reading this one. The woman is supposed to be 30 and in the 6% I'd read, they'd used the word 'hunk' 3 times and also described Matt as hot looking and "in-your-face, big-screen, major-league handsome." I also had issues thinking that men would have thoughts like sleeping in a room would be like sleeping in a purple carnation and referring to a color of pink resembling chewed bubble gum.
In addition to the general way that it was written, I thought it weird that one night she is so overwhelmed by his handsomeness she can't speak and the next she's a chatterbox that doesn't shut up. I'm sure that there are lots of people out there that would enjoy this type of writing, I'm just not a fan. Too bad, it seemed like it would be a nice story.
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