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A little bit about what you'll find reviewed on this blog: I believe the best books involve characters you wish you could read more about long after the book is finished. Recently, I've been searching for hidden gems from the past. I read mostly fiction, and I'm a bit of a prude. I don't normally enjoy books with sex or excessive language.

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I raised two wonderful girls, and I'm super proud of them. I enjoy reading (of course), sewing, cross stitching, photography and writing. I live in the high desert portion of Washington (which I didn't know existed until my husband and I decided to move here) and have really enjoyed my time out here. I am excited to see what God has next in store for my life!

Tuesday, March 3, 2020

One Little Lie (Pelican Harbor #1) - Colleen Coble


This is part of a series.  The second installment is due out September 2020.

Jane is the new chief of police, but not everyone is congratulating her on the position.  She also has a journalist following her around filming her for a documentary.  While she isn’t happy about it, she doesn’t have a choice, and she needs to focus on the murders occurring in her tiny town.

Reid isn’t just making a documentary.  He’s there with his son to check into Jane.  He is holding on to some painful secrets, and they’re all going to catch up to him in Pelican Harbor.

What makes this a 3-star review for me is the convolution and the ending.  The plot had too many things going on.  When I read, “I know it seems convoluted,” I almost laughed out loud.  It was like the character was saying what I’d been thinking for so long.  There were multiple times I’d come across an element I’d forgotten, or it took me a moment to remember a certain character.

The other disappointment was the romance.  The ending was such a letdown.  If you want a continuation of Reid and Jane’s romance, you have to get book 2.  I’m not used to this kind of cliffhanger from the author, and I didn’t like it.  Also, it didn’t make sense for Jane to have trust issues for the whole book and not spare a single moment considering someone else having the same issues.  I didn’t expect instant forgiveness, but leaving the relationship on a cliffhanger was just weird and unsatisfying.

A couple things bothered me but didn’t affect my overall review score.  The first is the horn tooting at the beginning.  How much is too much these days?  I feel like 2% of the total book is too much.  For goodness sake, there’s at least 4 quotes FROM THE SAME PERSON!  Does anyone even read those?  I don’t.  I just happened to catch a familiar name more than once and went back to see what the deal was.

The other thing is the attention to detail.  For example, if you’re going to mention Dairy Queen’s Peanut Buster Parfait, at least know what it is.  There isn’t any hot chocolate or caramel in the PBP.  A simple Google search will tell you that there are 3 ingredients: hot fudge, peanuts and soft serve.  That’s it.  Maybe that mistake was caught before the final print, but it was incredibly disappointing after some of the well-researched novels I’ve read recently.

Overall, it’s not a bad book, it just wasn’t what I was expecting.  It seemed unnecessarily complicated while not giving me enough at the same time.  Even the villain’s motivations felt strange.  I’ve enjoyed so many of Coble’s books in the past, but this one was a miss for me.

*I received a copy of this book from Thomas Nelson through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.



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